The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.
The line graph below demonstrates average annual expenditures on
cell
phone
and residential phone
services
over a decade, from 2001 to 2010.
Overall
, cell
phone
services
was
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were
on
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at
its
lowest Correct pronoun usage
their
point
in the beginning, and then
showed rose
, Correct article usage
a rose
while
residential phone
services
illustrated downward
trend.
Correct article usage
a downward
Cell
phone
services
was
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were
on
200$ in 2001 and Change preposition
apply
then
suddenly rose, exceeding cell
phone
services
in 20006 at the point
of approximately 550$. At the end
of the period
the figure showed its highest Add a comma
,period
point
at 750$.
Residential phone
services
started at 700$ in 2001 and then
fell steadily until 2006 to reach 550$. In one year period between 2006 and 2007
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,2007
this
figure showed rapid
fall to just under 500$. Correct article usage
a rapid
Then
the graph dropped gradually to its lowest point
at 400$ in 2010.Submitted by sagynysh.mutigulliyeva.01 on
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