The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010.
The line graph below demonstrates average annual expenditures on
cell
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phone
and residential Use synonyms
phone
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services
over a decade, from 2001 to 2010.
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Overall
, Linking Words
cell
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phone
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services
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was
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were
on
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at
its
lowest Correct pronoun usage
their
point
in the beginning, and Use synonyms
then
showed Linking Words
rose
, Correct article usage
a rose
while
residential Linking Words
phone
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services
illustrated Use synonyms
downward
trend.
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a downward
Cell
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phone
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services
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was
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were
on
200$ in 2001 and Change preposition
apply
then
suddenly rose, exceeding Linking Words
cell
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phone
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services
in 20006 at the Use synonyms
point
of approximately 550$. Use synonyms
At the end
of the Linking Words
period
the figure showed its highest Add a comma
,period
point
at 750$.
Residential Use synonyms
phone
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services
started at 700$ in 2001 and Use synonyms
then
fell steadily until 2006 to reach 550$. In one year period between 2006 and Linking Words
2007
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,2007
this
figure showed Linking Words
rapid
fall to just under 500$. Correct article usage
a rapid
Then
the graph dropped gradually to its lowest Linking Words
point
at 400$ in 2010.Use synonyms
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