The graph below shows the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar chart depicts four different modes of transport used by New Zealand's visitors from Britain, Germany, Japan, Korea, and Australia in the year 2004. A glance at the chart reveals that car was the most popular mean of transport between British, German, and Australians.
As
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can be observed, travelling by Ferries was the least popular among Korean, and Japanese people with just less than 10% using them. Correct pronoun usage
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Although
the majority of the Korean individuals around 40% utilized coaches, this
type of transport was used by the minority of British, German, and Australian people by a mere 20%, 20%, and 10% respectively.
It can be seen that only 25% of the Japanese preferred to use an automobile. In addition
, individuals
from Japan shared almost the same interest in air and coach travels by more than 50%. Australia ranked third in car use by just less than 50%. 52% of Germans and 60% of British people used automobiles which ranked second and first in the usage of cars.Submitted by Nima on
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