The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zeeland in 2003 and 2013.
The given pie charts present the types of services in
online
shopping Add an article
the online
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center
and Fix the agreement mistake
centers
percentage
of customers in each section in New Zeeland in 2003 and 2013.
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the percentage
Overall
, travel and Linking Words
clothe
sections have dropped, Change the form of the verb
clothing
while
mass media, Linking Words
such
as films, music and book Linking Words
sales
showed Use synonyms
rise
.
In 2003, travel occupied the biggest portion of Add an article
a rise
sales
, just over Use synonyms
than
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apply
the
third of total Correct article usage
a
sales
. Clothe and films/music section has approximately the same draws, 24 and 21 Use synonyms
percent
respectively. The less popular sort of product Change the spelling
per cent
was books
with 19%.
In 2013, there was Change the verb form
was booked
not
big change in proportions. Film and music become domain Correct your spelling
no
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
sales
(33$). Use synonyms
Journey
section occupied 29% of all Correct article usage
The journey
sales
. Books and clothes changed only marginally.Use synonyms
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