You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The given bar graph illustrates the five different age groups of UK

citizens's

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citizens'

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total

spendings

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spending

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on

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in

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three categories in 2004.

Overall

,

residents's

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residents'

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expense ratio

on

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in

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the culinary sector slightly increased,

however

, the percentage of expenditure on

the

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apply

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restaurant and hotel services followed a downward trend by

aging

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ageing

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. The group

of

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apply

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Under 30

was

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only spent 6% of total revenue on food and drink and

this

ratio increased by 17% to approximately 23% in the Above-76-year-old class.

Moreover

, the outcome for entertainment facilities

also

saw

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a noticable

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noticable

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noticeable

upward trend by

aging

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ageing

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,

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and peaked at 23% in the 61-

75 year-old

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75-year-old

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group,

then

experienced a drop by 10% in 2004. The remaining spending area was restaurant and hotel payments dropped

slighly

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slightly

in the older generations. Before inclined by roughly 5% in the age of 76-plus group, hit the bottom at 2% in the 61-75 years old

citizens's

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citizens

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category.