You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given bar graph illustrates the five different age groups of UK
citizens's
total Remove the s
citizens'
spendings
Fix the agreement mistake
spending
on
three categories in 2004. Change preposition
in
Overall
, residents's
expense ratio Remove the s
residents'
on
the culinary sector slightly increased, Change preposition
in
however
, the percentage of expenditure on the
restaurant and hotel services followed a downward trend by Correct article usage
apply
aging
.
The group Change the spelling
ageing
of
Under 30 Change preposition
apply
was
only spent 6% of total revenue on food and drink and Unnecessary verb
apply
this
ratio increased by 17% to approximately 23% in the Above-76-year-old class. Moreover
, the outcome for entertainment facilities also
saw Correct article usage
a noticable
noticable
upward trend by Correct your spelling
noticeable
aging
Change the spelling
ageing
,
and peaked at 23% in the 61-Remove the comma
apply
75 year-old
group, Add a hyphen
75-year-old
then
experienced a drop by 10% in 2004.
The remaining spending area was restaurant and hotel payments dropped slighly
in the older generations. Before inclined by roughly 5% in the age of 76-plus group, hit the bottom at 2% in the 61-75 years old Correct your spelling
slightly
citizens's
category.Change noun form
citizens
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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