Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Someone
think
that Change the verb form
thinks
video
games
have harmless fun or even useful educational tool. When others think that video
games
have adverse effect
on gamers. In my view, though there could be some advantages Fix the agreement mistake
effects
of
playing Change preposition
to
games
, the effect of drawbacks is more obvious on
the Change preposition
to
people
who play them.
On the one hand, there must be some advantages for people
who like playing games
. Firstly
, every person cannot work all the time
without social
with others so they need Replace the word
socialising
time
to contact with
their friends. Playing Change preposition
apply
video
games
is a convenient and popular way to communicate with friends which can enhance friendship. Besides
, from educational
perspective, some Add an article
an educational
games
can also
show interesting knowledge. For example
, there are many games
focusing on history that
game Correct word choice
so that
player
can know a Fix the agreement mistake
players
Dynasty
history or a famous Change noun form
Dynasty's
people
life. Change noun form
people's
By
Change preposition
In
this
way, people
can wide
their Replace the word
widen
horizon
in an active way and have more enjoyment.
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horizons
On the other hand
, I believe that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks following. Although
people
need relaxing time
, most of the games
consume time
and energy of players which Correct article usage
the time
make
them feel more tired. And the momentary joy Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
let
players addicted Correct subject-verb agreement
lets
in
and spend longer Change preposition
apply
time
on games
than they plan, especially teenagers whose self-control is bad. A long-
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Long-time
time
gaming let gamers have no time
work
or study to improve themselves and even Fix the infinitive
to work
have
damage Unnecessary verb
apply
on
their physical health. Though there are Change preposition
apply
limitation
or caution on health. Most of the gamers will ignore the notice and continue playing.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
limitations
while
there are positive aspects of video
games
in relaxation or education, most of
players cannot resist the temptation to be happy and spend more Change preposition
apply
time
in games
and ignore reality.Submitted by huangzijun2293 on
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