Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
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thinks
video
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games
have harmless fun or even useful educational tool. When others think that Use synonyms
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have adverse Use synonyms
effect
on gamers. In my view, though there could be some advantages Fix the agreement mistake
effects
of
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to
games
, the effect of drawbacks is more obvious Use synonyms
on
the Change preposition
to
people
who play them.
On the one hand, there must be some advantages for Use synonyms
people
who like playing Use synonyms
games
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, every person cannot work all the Linking Words
time
without Use synonyms
social
with others so they need Replace the word
socialising
time
to contact Use synonyms
with
their friends. Playing Change preposition
apply
video
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games
is a convenient and popular way to communicate with friends which can enhance friendship. Use synonyms
Besides
, from Linking Words
educational
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an educational
games
can Use synonyms
also
show interesting knowledge. Linking Words
For example
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games
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that
game Correct word choice
so that
player
can know a Fix the agreement mistake
players
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history or a famous Change noun form
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people
life. Change noun form
people's
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horizon
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On the other hand
, I believe that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks following. Linking Words
Although
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people
need relaxing Use synonyms
time
, most of the Use synonyms
games
consume Use synonyms
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time
and energy of players which Correct article usage
the time
make
them feel more tired. And the momentary joy Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
let
players addicted Correct subject-verb agreement
lets
in
and spend longer Change preposition
apply
time
on Use synonyms
games
than they plan, especially teenagers whose self-control is bad. Use synonyms
A long-
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gaming let gamers have no Use synonyms
time
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work
or study to improve themselves and even Fix the infinitive
to work
have
damage Unnecessary verb
apply
on
their physical health. Though there are Change preposition
apply
limitation
or caution on health. Most of the gamers will ignore the notice and continue playing.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
limitations
while
there are positive aspects of Linking Words
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games
in relaxation or education, most Use synonyms
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players cannot resist the temptation to be happy and spend more Change preposition
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in Use synonyms
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and ignore reality.Use synonyms
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