The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The blueprint illustrates the changes that occurs at
liverton
docks since 1980.
Correct your spelling
Riverton
Tiverton
Everton
Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that in both years the floor area remains unchanged however
, the structures surrounding the bay change over the period of time where new and reconstructed buildings
can be found.
On the one hand, in the year ,1980 the shipyard had 3 structures. 2 warehouses on the north side
with a crane in the middle and one in the south. Moreover
, ships are parked in between the warehouses. It can accommodate at least four ships in total. Additionally
, the coast is on the east side
of the yard.
On the other hand
, currently, the spaces where the previous warehouses are located are now occupied by various buildings
. They also
build a bridge over the river to connect the two sides, a riverwalk is also
a new addition as well as
, a flood barrier. On the north side
, 3 buildings
were built such
as Education Centre on the left and a Kid's playing area on the right. In between these two structures is the sailing club. Furthermore
, below the education centre is the ship museum. In more details
, 2 accommodation Fix the agreement mistake
detail
buildings
and a
parking were constructed Remove the article
apply
at
the south Change preposition
on
side
of the river.Submitted by Anneya
on
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