You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it,

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Dear
Mr.
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Mohammed, I am writing to you
for
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the
possiblity
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possibility
of working in the head
office
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department in
United
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Kingdom for
next
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six months. As you may know, our company has
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headquarter
office
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in London and I am looking for an opportunity to gain
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great experience
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enhance my professional skills in
sales
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and marketing field there.
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, I got a high performance rate
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year and have superb English language skills which are the two essential requirements for working in the main
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. During
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period, I will remotely ensure to complete all required tasks here in our branch to avoid any overdue work.
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, I am willing to work on Saturday when I resume my duty in our
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to make sure everything
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going smoothly. I realize that it might be inconvenient for you and other team members,
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, I believe
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chance
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will add a competitive edge to our sales and marketing department.
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, I am looking forward
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your kind assistance in arranging
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trip with the head
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. Appreciate your kind cooperation and consideration Sincerely, Aya Issa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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