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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it,

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Dear
Mr.
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 Mohammed, I am writing to you
for
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 the
possiblity
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possibility
 of working in the head
office
 department in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom for
next
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the next
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 six months. As you may know, our company has
the
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 headquarter
office
 in London and I am looking for an opportunity to gain
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great experience
as well as
 enhance my professional skills in
sales
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 and marketing field there.
In addition
, I got a high performance rate
this
 year and have superb English language skills which are the two essential requirements for working in the main
office
. During
this
 period, I will remotely ensure to complete all required tasks here in our branch to avoid any overdue work.
Therefore
, I am willing to work on Saturday when I resume my duty in our
office
 to make sure everything
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 going smoothly. I realize that it might be inconvenient for you and other team members,
however
, I believe
this
chance
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 will add a competitive edge to our sales and marketing department.
Finally
, I am looking forward
for
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 your kind assistance in arranging
this
 trip with the head
office
. Appreciate your kind cooperation and consideration Sincerely, Aya Issa
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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