The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.

The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The given table compares the amount of waste which was produced in six different countries from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there was a significant change throughout the period , five of six countries saw an increase and the US dominated in all years.
To begin
with, in 1980 the
figures
for Japan were 28
million
which is seven times bigger than Poland in
this
year.
Furthermore
,
this
year Ireland accounted for only 0.6
million
and Portugal for 2
million
,
whereas
figures
for the US were far higher 131
million
. No
figures
are given for Korea.
In addition
to
this
, in 1990 Japan and Korea accounted for almost the same 31 and 32
million
respectively.
However
, the
figures
for Poland were 5
million
and for Portugal 3
million
,
while
the US accounted for far bigger 151
million
.
By contrast
, in 2000
figures
for Ireland and Portugal were the same 5
million
,
while
this
year the US accounted for 192
million
which is roughly ten times bigger than Korea (19
million
).
Finally
, the
figures
for Japan and Poland were 53 and 6.6
million
respectively.
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