The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period.
The given table compares the amount of waste which was produced in six different countries from 1980 to 2000.
Overall
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it is clear that
there was a significant change throughout the period , five of six countries saw an increase and the US dominated in all years.
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To begin
with, in 1980 the Linking Words
figures
for Japan were 28 Use synonyms
million
which is seven times bigger than Poland in Use synonyms
this
year. Linking Words
Furthermore
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this
year Ireland accounted for only 0.6 Linking Words
million
and Portugal for 2 Use synonyms
million
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whereas
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figures
for the US were far higher 131 Use synonyms
million
. No Use synonyms
figures
are given for Korea. Use synonyms
In addition
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this
, in 1990 Japan and Korea accounted for almost the same 31 and 32 Linking Words
million
respectively. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
figures
for Poland were 5 Use synonyms
million
and for Portugal 3 Use synonyms
million
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while
the US accounted for far bigger 151 Linking Words
million
.
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By contrast
, in 2000 Linking Words
figures
for Ireland and Portugal were the same 5 Use synonyms
million
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while
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this
year the US accounted for 192 Linking Words
million
which is roughly ten times bigger than Korea (19 Use synonyms
million
). Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
figures
for Japan and Poland were 53 and 6.6 Use synonyms
million
respectively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figures, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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