The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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differences

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between 1920 and 2019 in the percentage of households with electrical appliances and the

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of

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of housework per week, per household. As can be seen in the first chart given, in general, from 1920 to 2019 the data shows us that it was an upward trend. In 1920, no one had

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refrigerator

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, but in the next 20 years, we had a significant increase from 0 to 50

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and became the

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the owner was in the second place.

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that, the figure

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wasing

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and

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was

at

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40 and 30

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percent

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respectively in 1920 and in 1940

this

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number

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slightly rose from 40 to 60

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for washing

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machines

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and from 30 to 50

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for

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.

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in 1960 people could see the speed growth of

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from 50 to 90

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and the

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cleaner continued to increase from 50 to 70 and the quantity of washing

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machine

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was slow

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as the same

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of

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, from 60 to 70

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. In 1980, the

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of

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reached

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peak at 100

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and at the same time, the

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than the washing

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at 90 and 62

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respectively. In 2000 and 2019, the figure

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refrigerator

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was

steadily

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and the

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of

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reached the top in 2000 and

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also

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in 2019 but the owner of

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machine

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between 2000 and 2019 mildly increased from 70 to 72

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percent

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. Thanks

for

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modern technology, from 1920 to 1960, the time that people

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spent

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housework

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significantly decreased from 50 to 20

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per week. From 1960 to 1980,

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figure had a slight fall from 20 to 12

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and the next 20 years didn’t have any changes, but after 19 years it continued

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from 12 to 10

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, we can see if the data of the owner of the machines

such

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as

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and washing

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machine

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or

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vacuum

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had rapidly increased, the

number

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of

hours

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of housework per week has suddenly decreased.