You have just finished your master’s degree and need to leave your current part-time job to search for full-time employment. Write a letter to your current employer. In your letter o● explain why you will not pursue a full-time job in his/her company o ● say why you’ve enjoyed working for him/her o ● tell him/her how much longer you will continue to work for him/her.

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Dear Tony I hope
this
message finds you well, and I am writing to request a leave
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your company since I have finished my master’s degree and I would like to find a full-time job at
this
stage. As you know I have worked in your company Leisure Time for almost a year as a part-time coworker, I really appreciated that you gave me
such
a great chance to learn and how supportive you were, yet, despite
this
, I would like to find a full-time job related to my current major as finance. I remember the first time I came to your store and applied for a job
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as a sales coworker. I love being with customers but I didn’t have any skill
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sales, so you have taught me how to talk to
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and help them make buying decisions, on account of
this
, I started making a deal and developing my selling skills. In light of the above, I was wondering if I could leave
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June 24th since I have planned my trip to Beijing to take part in the biggest employment conference. I would very much appreciate it if you could do
this
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for me and I would try my best to handover to a
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and make it more
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. I look forward to hearing from you and I thank you in advance. Yours faithfully Regina Chen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • part-time employment
  • full-time employment
  • qualifications
  • master's degree
  • gratitude
  • valuable experience
  • professional courtesy
  • adequate notice
  • transition period
  • mentorship
  • company culture
  • teamwork
  • professional relationship
  • commitment
  • dedication
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