The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the ratio of the city population in four separate Asian countries from 1970 to 2020
as well as
the predictions for 2030 and 2040. Overall
, it is significant to observe that the figures of Malaysia have developed dramatically whereas
Thailand
barely progressed over time.
During the said period, the Philippines have gone through a sharp plunge before descending slowly and rising up again. Meanwhile, Indonesia increased and grew over time, reaching its peak in 2040 at 60 per cent while
Thailand
's statistics barely developed.
According to
the line graph, one thing worth mentioning is the contrast between Thailand
's and Indonesia's progression, which Indonesia easily passed despite starting off with a lower percentage of just under 15%. Furthermore
, throughout the time period, the predictions indicate that when 2040 arrives, Thailand
will receive a more drastic growth while
other figures continue to progress steadily.Submitted by supercalifragilisticexpliadocious on
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