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It is believed by some, that teaching offspring a foreign language is more advantageous in elementary school compared to educating them an other tongue in middle school. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this issue, however agrees that benefits outweighs the negatives.

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It is believed by some, that teaching offspring a foreign
language
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 is more advantageous in elementary school compared to educating them
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 tongue in middle school.
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 essay will discuss both pros and cons of
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 issue,
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 agrees that
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 the negatives. As one of the main positives of children studying an additional tongue can be called the flexibility of youngsters’
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 to analyse and remember a tonne of new information.
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, compared to an average adult, a kid has
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 ability to learn an absolutely new
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 quite fast. A scientific article
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 than older part of society.
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 decrease throughout the years. Another advantage is that young people are more confident in themselves which has a definitely good impact
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 learning a
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 in themselves, whilst kids are often
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not frightened to make mistakes. Turning to the other side of the argument, including another
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 system can cause difficulties in managing all classes and perhaps, has
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 performance of offspring. Another major disadvantage is
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 risk that in the future children will struggle to speak one
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 clearly and mix plenty of tongues in their speech. It
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obviously would cause issues during exams or in workplaces. Having weighed everything mentioned
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, we can come to
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 conclusion that
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 offspring
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 languages is beneficial owing
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the reasons that usually children are full of confident and fast learners.
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, it can be tough to deal with additional classes and they can be deprived
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 ability to use one only
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 without mixing up.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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