Plastic bags, bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to slove this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is a common belief that the most damaging thing for our nature is
plastic
. whether it is a bottle, bag, or any food plate. In my opinion, I consider
this
problem affect our life in multiple ways and we should take real steps toward it. on the one hand, we all know that
plastic
provides an easy lifestyle but
besides
this
, the thing it destroyed our community and natural life. In fact, we should realize the fact that slowly we lose our beautiful world and day by day it became harder and harder to solve it.
In addition
, it kills our sea animals, damages our earth, and
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imposiable
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impossible
to recycle completely not just
this
but
also
damages the planet's effect by polluting the air when it is burned.
For example
, there are huge amounts of turtles dying each month just because they eat some of the
plastic
in the ocean or camels when they eat bags in the desert. there we can not remain without any solution anymore.
on the other hand
, our people are the first who is the faced
this
so the solutions start with them,
firstly
, the government should raise students'
awearness
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awareness
of
this
and acknowledge them to read and to tell their families and friends. ,
,
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moreover
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anyone paying extra
plastic
requirements should have a tax.
secondly
, encourage young people to recycle in their homes.
Finally
, we could see that Korea start taking tax from anyone paying for plastics and
thus
increase the healthiness and the citizen mindset about
this
. In conclusion, our society is our responsibility and we should take it seriously by reading, learning, and trying both ways folks and managing to reduce the output for it.
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