The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in work after 5 years
The given chart illustrates what anthropology
graduators
from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course, Replace the word
graduates
while
table
shows Add an article
the table
salaries
of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.
Correct article usage
the salaries
Overall
, it is clear that
the most amount of graduators
accounts for full-time work. Replace the word
graduates
Also
the Add a comma
,Also
most
biggest salary makes up Change the adjective
apply
government
sector.Correct article usage
the government
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