Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to advice of family and friends. Others believe that the best way learning way of learning is through personal experience. What is the best way in you opinion?
Learning is a thing which creates and smooths your
way
to your dream. There should not be any closed doors raised in its way
. So, It can be gained through our own experiences or from the guidance of friends or family members.
In the start, I am
very much convinced on the fact that my parents, brothers, sisters and friends Wrong verb form
was
are
the most honest and loyal to me. Wrong verb form
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Similarly
, They will show me the right direction whatever the situation comes. Moreover
, They have lifetime gains in their understanding and practical point of view in looking at the things
which could be beneficial for me. For instance
, If I am stuck in a situation to decide on something, they might help me out according to
their wisdom and vision. In the same way
, They may reveal some hidden angles of the things
which I might be ignoring.
On the other hand
, I am the one who knows my situation better than anyone else. I have better knowledge of what is important and substantial for me to take on. Furthermore
, I made a lot of mistakes and gained significant knowledge from them which help
me to go Wrong verb form
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further
. For example
, If I chose the wrong way
of doing something and afterwards you realised that I did it inversely. It taught me several lessons. Likewise
, I am the one who ultimately knows the compatibility of things
and issues related to me. So, Even if someone gives me advice, I will match it with my dream and passion and could
decide that it is beneficial for me.
In conclusion, I would strongly recommend focusing on both sources to comprehend Verb problem
apply
things
in a better way
. It will increase my exposure, vibrance and understanding of the matters in life.Submitted by kash.omer32 on
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Coherence and cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly states your position on the topic and outlines the main points that will be discussed in the essay. Also, provide a more conclusive ending to your essay that summarizes the main points and reinforces your position.
Task Achievement
While your essay covers both perspectives and provides examples, make sure to clearly address the prompt by expressing a clear opinion on which learning method you believe is best. Ensure that your examples are relevant and directly support your argument.
Your opinion
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