The chart below Shows the total number of minutes (billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart gives information about the total
number
of minutes
of UK telephone
calls in three main categories (local, national and international and mobiles
) between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
, it is clear that
the highest number
of UK telephone
calls was allocated to local, while
the lowest was that of mobiles
. In addition
, the number
of telephone
calls per minute in two categories, named mobiles
and national and international increased, while
that of local remained constant over 7 years.
In 1995, the figure
for telephone
calls local stood first with about 73 billion
minutes
, while
that for mobiles
ranked last
with approximately 3 billion
minutes
. By increasing years, the figure
for all methods of telephone
calls increased until 1999, in this
year the number
of local telephone
calls peaked at 90 billion
minutes
, then
it experienced a slight decrease to reach its initial figure
.
After 1999, the number
of national and international and
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mobiles
telephone
calls increased, while
the increasing trend of mobiles
was faster than the national and international trend. At the end
of the period, the figure
for mobiles
had a significant difference from that for its initial with a narrow margin of 40 billion
minutes
, and the figure
for national and international reached above 60 billion
minutes
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