The chart below Shows the total number of minutes (billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below Shows the total number of minutes (billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
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The bar chart gives information about the total
number
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of
minutes
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of UK
telephone
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calls in three main categories (local, national and international and
mobiles
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) between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the highest
number
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of UK
telephone
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calls was allocated to local,
while
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the lowest was that of
mobiles
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.
In addition
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, the
number
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of
telephone
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calls per minute in two categories, named
mobiles
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and national and international increased,
while
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that of local remained constant over 7 years. In 1995, the
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for
telephone
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calls local stood first with about 73
billion
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minutes
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,
while
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that for
mobiles
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ranked
last
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with approximately 3
billion
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minutes
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. By increasing years, the
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for all methods of
telephone
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calls increased until 1999, in
this
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year the
number
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of local
telephone
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calls peaked at 90
billion
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minutes
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,
then
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it experienced a slight decrease to reach its initial
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. After 1999, the
number
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of national and international
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mobiles
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telephone
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calls increased,
while
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the increasing trend of
mobiles
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was faster than the national and international trend.
At the end
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of the period, the
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for
mobiles
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had a significant difference from that for its initial with a narrow margin of 40
billion
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minutes
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, and the
figure
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for national and international reached above 60
billion
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minutes
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, minutes, telephone, mobiles, figure, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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