The chart below Shows the total number of minutes (billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below Shows the total number of minutes (billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar chart gives information about the total
number
of
minutes
of UK
telephone
calls in three main categories (local, national and international and
mobiles
) between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest
number
of UK
telephone
calls was allocated to local,
while
the lowest was that of
mobiles
.
In addition
, the
number
of
telephone
calls per minute in two categories, named
mobiles
and national and international increased,
while
that of local remained constant over 7 years. In 1995, the
figure
for
telephone
calls local stood first with about 73
billion
minutes
,
while
that for
mobiles
ranked
last
with approximately 3
billion
minutes
. By increasing years, the
figure
for all methods of
telephone
calls increased until 1999, in
this
year the
number
of local
telephone
calls peaked at 90
billion
minutes
,
then
it experienced a slight decrease to reach its initial
figure
. After 1999, the
number
of national and international
and
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mobiles
telephone
calls increased,
while
the increasing trend of
mobiles
was faster than the national and international trend.
At the end
of the period, the
figure
for
mobiles
had a significant difference from that for its initial with a narrow margin of 40
billion
minutes
, and the
figure
for national and international reached above 60
billion
minutes
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, minutes, telephone, mobiles, figure, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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