Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people argue that university
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wish to study many kinds of subjects.
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, Others say that
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should study for a
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. I strongly believe that both studying
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are
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rate very important. When it comes to aimed
qualification
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studying, the
students
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who only spend time studying for a
qualification
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have more chances of getting a
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. Because
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they were already proved by
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examination. The
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will be professional employees
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as doctors, lawyers and accountants. They
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not wide knowledge but deep knowledge.
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, a lot of
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hope to learn several subjects. They have many reasons. Among them one reason,
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in the future, they will get a
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which would choice range widely.
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, they are going to be more useful employees of many different
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categories.
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, some
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have the main subject of computer development. if they study design too. When they make an APP or WEB service in the company, they can work on all steps from design to development. Many companies want the already employees. In conclusion, the two studying
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both are good ways to get a
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after university graduation. Someone wants several knowledge.
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, someone needs a
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. The way
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students
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choice
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the
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should be different from their aim. If they want to be
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content creators, they would study too many subjects. And, if they want to be a doctor, they would study for a
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. So, the studying
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are not good or good.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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