The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030
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The line graph shows how much energy is used in terms of six fuel categories in the USA between 1980 and 2030.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the
consumption
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of petrol and oil stands first during the period.
In addition
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, the
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for
consumption
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of coal and natural
gas
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increased,
while
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that of hydropower remained constant. In 1980, the
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for usage of petrol and oil ranked first with 35
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units
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,
while
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that of nuclear, solar or wind and hydropower stood
last
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with less than 5
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units
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.
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the
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for natural
gas
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was higher than coal at the beginning of the period with 20 and 15
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units
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respectively, the
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for
consumption
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of coal overtook that for natural
gas
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in 1990. It is noteworthy that the
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for petrol and oil increased significantly and it is expected to rise after 2020 to reach its peak at 50
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units
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. The
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for natural
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experienced some fluctuations almost before 2020 and after that, it is predicted to remain at its level at 25
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units
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.
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, the
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for coal showed a substantial rise before 2020 and it will continue its growth to reach 30
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units
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. It is noteworthy that, the
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of nuclear and solar or wind energy rose slightly to almost 10
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in the first 20 years, and it is predicted to pursue their upward trend.
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, the
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for hydropower remained stable at approximately 4
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units
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, and after 2020, it will not be changed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, figure, gas, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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