MANY PEOPLE SAY THAT PROVIDING ACCESS TO CLEAN WATER SHOULD BE THE MAIN FOCUS FOR INTERNATIONAL AID ORGANISATIONS. OTHERS SAY THAT THERE ARE MORE IMPORTANT USES FOR INTERNATIONAL AID.

Nowadays, all around the world are a lot of problems that need international aid. One of the
trouble
is dirty
water
, but it isn't alone an important
people
's problem. Another problem is the world war. In these essays, we try to speak about both opinions and analyze them. I think we have more
trouble
than having clean
water
. On the one hand, many
people
think if the
water
problem is solved, we won't have serious
trouble
.
this
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opinion is true because if
people
drink dirty
water
, they will get diseases,
due to
society have economic
trouble
.
For example
, coronavirus is a world disease that many
people
get and a lot of
people
diet and many
people
get respiratory problems.
this
sickness leads to many problems like the government's financial management.
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