The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
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for four different platforms, namely mobile phones, online, consoles and handheld devices, from 2000 to 2006.
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were at least twice as high as those for any other platform in almost every year.
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