“Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today's world." Use reasons and details to support your opinion.

In recent times, the use of
internet
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the internet
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has become popular and
this
has
majorly
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a majorly
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advantageous influence on lifestyle in
present
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the present
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day. The benefits that accrue from using the
internet
are widely dispersed in all aspects of life and
this
I agree with.
Firstly
, there is easy access to
information
these days
due to
the presence of the
internet
.
Information
which
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that
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previously may
be
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have been
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restricted to certain areas
are
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is
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now available to people online.
For example
, a student can easily access the brochure of a university remotely.
This
may not have been possible except
the
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student or a representative
visits
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the school physically to get
this
information
.
Secondly
, the
internet
enhances interaction around the globe. The world has become a "global village" thanks to the
internet
. People can have social, academic or economic interactions online via the
internet
.
This
is because the
internet
offers the opportunity for more people to meet at a time
while
at different locations. In conclusion, I think the
internet
has done more good in our present world because of its advantages. Access to
information
and human interaction
have
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been improved by its presence.
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