The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.

The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.
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The plans below illustrate visual data about how a public
library
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is currently, and how it used to be 20 years ago.
Overall
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, the
library
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has gone through a significant change, and it is more convenient now.
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, it has become a better
place
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for the local community to gather. Looking at the centre of the
library
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, the tables and chairs have been removed. The eastern
side
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of the
library
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, where adult non-fiction
books
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used to be situated, is now a
place
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where the information desk, self-service machines, and the adult fiction
books
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sector are located. The adult fiction
books
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sector on the western
side
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has been replaced by a new sector for all reference
books
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. If we look at the rooms, it is evident that the
room
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on the north-western
side
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, which was a
room
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for computers, computer games, and videos, has turned into a
place
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where storytelling events are held, and the shelves of children’s fiction
books
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are located.
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, some pieces of furniture have been added to the
place
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to make it more comfortable. The
room
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for children’s
books
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which was located on the north-eastern
side
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of the
library
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has become a lecture
room
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. The former enquiry desk has been turned down to make
room
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for a café, and the previous reading
room
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is a computer
room
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now.
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