The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.
The plans below illustrate visual data about how a public
library
is currently, and how it used to be 20 years ago.
Overall
, the library
has gone through a significant change, and it is more convenient now. In addition
, it has become a better place
for the local community to gather.
Looking at the centre of the library
, the tables and chairs have been removed. The eastern side
of the library
, where adult non-fiction books
used to be situated, is now a place
where the information desk, self-service machines, and the adult fiction books
sector are located. The adult fiction books
sector on the western side
has been replaced by a new sector for all reference books
.
If we look at the rooms, it is evident that the room
on the north-western side
, which was a room
for computers, computer games, and videos, has turned into a place
where storytelling events are held, and the shelves of children’s fiction books
are located. In addition
, some pieces of furniture have been added to the place
to make it more comfortable. The room
for children’s books
which was located on the north-eastern side
of the library
has become a lecture room
. The former enquiry desk has been turned down to make room
for a café, and the previous reading room
is a computer room
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