The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.

The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.
The plans below illustrate visual data about how a public
library
is currently, and how it used to be 20 years ago.
Overall
, the
library
has gone through a significant change, and it is more convenient now.
In addition
, it has become a better
place
for the local community to gather. Looking at the centre of the
library
, the tables and chairs have been removed. The eastern
side
of the
library
, where adult non-fiction
books
used to be situated, is now a
place
where the information desk, self-service machines, and the adult fiction
books
sector are located. The adult fiction
books
sector on the western
side
has been replaced by a new sector for all reference
books
. If we look at the rooms, it is evident that the
room
on the north-western
side
, which was a
room
for computers, computer games, and videos, has turned into a
place
where storytelling events are held, and the shelves of children’s fiction
books
are located.
In addition
, some pieces of furniture have been added to the
place
to make it more comfortable. The
room
for children’s
books
which was located on the north-eastern
side
of the
library
has become a lecture
room
. The former enquiry desk has been turned down to make
room
for a café, and the previous reading
room
is a computer
room
now.
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