Advantages And Disadvantages Of Working With Children

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that working. Because they are prepared for life and not
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why several jobs appear, like working with
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, because the mother or father can not take
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. Working with
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is
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work that you
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, because there are a lot
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children
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of all ages, there are
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that
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have
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a disease or maybe their
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behaviour
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.
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currently there are several universities ,
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courses that teach how to take
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to eat every day . The
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have to be prepared for everything. So they have
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patience .
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there are a lot
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people
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that don’t know to teach
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or don’t have patience, but these points
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important when
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the
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children
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because can be the
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that are aggressive or he/she is bad . And
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other point is that the
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sick and can pass anything or
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worst
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the
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accident
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responsibility
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the
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cases where the person can steal the child and is
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in
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case. In my opinion is difficult to leave someone else taking
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of your child because you don’t know what it is like until you are not there. Is better to contract a
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responsible
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • behave
  • better
  • punished
  • rewarded
  • believe
  • effective
  • arguing
  • immediately
  • unwanted
  • fear
  • pain
  • good
  • actions
  • praise
  • treated
  • learn
  • positive
  • feedback
  • happy
  • feel
  • repeat
  • future
  • create
  • problems
  • rather
  • learn
  • wrong
  • caught
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