Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

The manufacturing industries are producing sugary foods and beverages which is creating an impact on the

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of the consumers. These high-calorie products should be priced high to avoid abundance in consumption among

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essay, I will be agreeing and discussing how these products' high price range will impact the individual in buying less of these. In my experience,

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I could say that

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are unaware of the calorie count contained in these processed

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because they are easily consumed. It is difficult to calculate the calories and sugar content as the manufacturers trick us by limiting the calorie count by providing data , per gram or 1 ml which translates us into thinking that it is very minimal. But, when we calculate the quantity of each package it definitely shows alarming data. When we go grocery shopping, we observe that canned foods are mostly located before the fresh fruits and vegetables section with low prices which automatically wires our brain to pick up being unaware of the fact that how harmful it is for us. The sugary

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shelved next to drinking water having half the price of water. I agree with the fact that all the sugary foods and

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should be expensive which promotes less consumption by every human.

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should be implemented by the manufacturing company because the

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of the population is in their hands.

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will encourage

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to consume less of it and

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awareness of

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hazards should be initiated on public platforms. Decreased consumption can

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be implemented by spreading knowledge about the high amount of calories

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promoting them to consume less. To summarise, increasing the prices and spreading awareness about the

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hazards that sugary

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automatically

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to buy less because

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will help them live a healthy life.