The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given plans illustrate

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design of an airport at present and

also

present the

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of future

map

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for the next coming year. As

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apply

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can be seen in the maps, compared to the current one, the redeveloping map will construct numerous new gates which will be formed like

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Y, and build

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latest sky train

instead

of the walkway along the corridor.

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, there will be more facilities

such

ATM

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, shops and car hire in the terminal.

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, exchanging some particular and important locations will be accomplished and more benefits for

travelers

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in the upcoming project.

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, the designer had switched the check-in site from left to right at the left corner and

also

added more doors for each

departures

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and

arrivals

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arrival

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, one more café

restaurants

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, an ATM machine, and one car-renting store at the

rightest

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right

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position. The rest of

custom

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the custom

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checking spots will

be remaining

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remain

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in the future.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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157 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

infrastructure
terminal
runway
refurbishment
redevelopment
amenities
car park
hangar
concourse
public transport hub
access roads
boarding gates
check-in desk
baggage claim
departure lounge
observation deck
duty-free shopping

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep what are problems caused by lack of sleep? what can be done about this lack of sleep?

In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this?

Economic progress is one way to measure the success of a country, while some people think there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than economic progress?

Some people think companies should employ old people to work as they have a lot of working experience. Others, however, think it is better to recruit young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A faction of people hold(?) the notion that employment in(?) not necessary if there is a stable income. I totally agree with this opinion as ample reasons to substantiate it. This essay will explain my view with relevant illustrations.