The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given plans illustrate
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design of an airport at present and
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present the
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of future
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for the next coming year. As
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can be seen in the maps, compared to the current one, the redeveloping map will construct numerous new gates which will be formed like
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Y, and build
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latest sky train
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of the walkway along the corridor.
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, there will be more facilities
such
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as
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, shops and car hire in the terminal.
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, exchanging some particular and important locations will be accomplished and more benefits for
travelers
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in the upcoming project.
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, the designer had switched the check-in site from left to right at the left corner and
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added more doors for each
departures
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and
arrivals
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, one more café
restaurants
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restaurant
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, an ATM machine, and one car-renting store at the
rightest
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position. The rest of
custom
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checking spots will
be remaining
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in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • terminal
  • runway
  • refurbishment
  • redevelopment
  • amenities
  • car park
  • hangar
  • concourse
  • public transport hub
  • access roads
  • boarding gates
  • check-in desk
  • baggage claim
  • departure lounge
  • observation deck
  • duty-free shopping
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