The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates where people who were new migrants born in other countries, new migrants born in English-speaking nations, or born in
Canada
travelled to cinemas, theatres
, libraries, and zoos in Canada
. Overall
, most residents in Canada
preferred to watch movies at cinemas, but few Canadians wanted to spend money to watch shows at theatres
.
According to
the chart, the immigrants born in other states were more likely to visit libraries, in contrast
, only 10% of these residents visited theatres
in the past. It is noticeable that cinemas were the most popular leisure places for the
different groups of citizens, especially for customers who were born in Correct article usage
apply
Canada
where 70% of them went there. Based on the data provided, immigrants
who Correct article usage
the immigrants
born
in English-speaking countries Add a missing verb
were born
travelled
to zoos were higher than the other two groups of dwellers. Correct pronoun usage
who travelled
On the other hand
, less than 25% of each group of travelers
were interested in Change the spelling
travellers
theatres
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