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Band 5

Nowadays in many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that? How can this problem be solved?

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 at the present time. In recent times
people
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are
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have
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 buying
extra
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more
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 products
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then
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 they need. In
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 I will describe the causes of his
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 every company
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 to introduce new
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product
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products
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 for their customer and they try to do
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 marketing for that
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 which
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to
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their customer
for buying
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 it.
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this
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reason
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individuals
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 try to buy upgrade
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product
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products
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 where their older versions are reliable for
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. Industries and
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are try
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 to buy
upgrade
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product
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products
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 where they are older
version
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versions
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 are reliable for
use
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.
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Moreover
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 most
of
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the
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companies
are
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also
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use
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 non-biodegradable
plastic
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package
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packaging
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 for serving their
product
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.
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, in Bangladesh Chinese products are very popular but the packaging
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 mostly
plastic
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build
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. It is not only harmful
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 society but
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for
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environment
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.
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,we should
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 for
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 solution to
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problem
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. Only the government can not solve
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problem
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 alone
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individuals
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needed
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 to work for it.Authority should constitute a team for those companies who create
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product
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as well
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as
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 they should prohibit
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product
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 for local
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.They should encourage
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organizations
for
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 try to
less
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apply
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uses
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plastic
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 bags for their
product
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 packaging and try to build their
product
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 by using
material
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materials
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 or
alternative
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alternatives
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of
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 harmful
plastic
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.
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, we should try to skip the
use
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 of
plastic
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also
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 in our house, we should keep a separate dustbin for our West
product
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. If something is able to be used
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 we should
use
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 it or give
to
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it to
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any
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needy
people
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 who need
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 thing.
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, every
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 and government should take
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the naccessary
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naccessary
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necessary
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steps
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 for
this
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problem
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also
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individuals
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are
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apply
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should try to
use
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 their
product
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 for
long
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 time. If we do not take any initiative for
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problem
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, day by day it will
be demolish
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 our environment.

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coherence cohesion
To improve cohesion and logical flow, try to more clearly organize your paragraphs by focusing each one on a single main idea. Transition words and phrases can help guide the reader.
task achievement
Provide more specific and detailed examples to support your points. Elaboration on the reasons behind increased household waste and how certain solutions would function practically can make your essay more convincing.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points and emphasizes the urgency of the problem.
task achievement
The essay clearly identifies the problem of increasing household waste and offers potential solutions, demonstrating an understanding of the task requirements.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer culture
  • Convenience-driven lifestyle
  • Pre-packaged meals
  • Takeaway options
  • Recycling processes
  • Regulations
  • Landfills
  • Marketing strategies
  • Consumer behavior
  • Excessive packaging
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Sustainable practices
  • Educational campaigns
  • Eco-friendly choices
  • Government regulations
  • Incentives
  • Waste reduction
  • Sustainable packaging materials
  • Technology and infrastructure
  • Waste management systems
  • Advanced sorting technologies
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