Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.

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Although

some topics are based on the way of solution, theory, history etc.

while

some of the knowledge is gained by

experience

, both have their own quality to play a role in an individual's life. In

this

,essay I will discuss the importance of both of them. First of all, many subjects like science, accounting, art , and drama all are based on practicality. Though books give them basic knowledge still

experience

makes their work more valuable.

Also

by their own ,

experience

they can innovate something in the future as well.

For example

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recently India launched a 'Chandra yaan' to the moon because of more experienced scientists. On the other side, the story of our ancestors, some formulas in maths, and basic knowledge about a particular topic are only learned from books. For ,example some books were written ages ago which mention a lot of things related to history like the invention of zero, gravity etc

Secondly

, so many companies hire people their higher degrees without

experience

that attract students toward higher qualifications like doctors, teachers accountants ext. In conclusion, both

experience

and theory have their own importance. I think schools should teach them theoretical subjects

as well as

give them a chance to practice them in real life.

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Some people argue that experience is the best teacher. Life experiences can teach more effectively than books or formal school education. How far do you agree with this idea? Support your opinion with reasons and/or your personal experience.

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reason for this?How can people research this?

In many contries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that this the responsibility of governments to solve the problem. What extent do you agree or disagree?

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The best way to solve world’s traffic and environmental problems is increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree and give your own opinion?

Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?