Some people believe that government should financially support retired people others feel that those who have retired pay to support themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Certain individuals claim that the

government

have

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to assist retired

people

while

other part of

people

  assume that they should be economically

independend

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independent

. I tend to think that retired

people

should be assisted by the

government

because there more reasonable and correct to do that. There might be

saveral

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several

reasons why individuals hold the view that the

government

has to protect

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the finoncial

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finoncial ratirement

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financial retirement

generation.

Firstly

, the old population can not care about themselves and afford to be

finoncially

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financially

independent

such

as they

was

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then

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when

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they

have

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had

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a job and got a salary. It is because

,

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they do

nat

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not

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have any job,

therefore

they do not have

salary

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a salary

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. In Norway,

for instance

,

people

have

own

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their own

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fond for

hold

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holding

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and

make

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making

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profit

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a profit

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for future

pasion

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purposes

.

Secondly

, old

nation

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nations

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pay all

there

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their

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life taxes for their passion, and it

will

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be incorrect to not give them money which they make by hard work.

Apart from

this

in

nawadays

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nowadays

retired year become more older and older.

On the other hand

,

andoubtedly

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undoubtedly

, if

old

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the old

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population becomes financially

andependent

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independent

, it will be

aasier

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easier

for

government

to carry about other issues

such

as

palluted

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polluted

air

condition

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conditioning

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or

build

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building

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new

raads

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roads

reads

.

For example

, to

sapport

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support

retired

people

can

there

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their

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family

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families

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such

as

son

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a son

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or daughter,

they

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apply

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can save some money from salaries and give

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it for

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for

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them. In conclusion,

i

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would argue that helping

for

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apply

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the old nation in the financial case will be polite and sensible.

Although

it will

be

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apply

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cause more motivated

nation

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nations

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to make more money.