The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

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The behaviour of
community
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communities
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to copy
one
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another is
dominated
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especially in
fields
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that are used in their daily life
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as fashion and food.I completely with
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statement as
people
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born
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love to copy another thing or
one
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, they prefer to have
one
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who guides them, and
this
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behaviour opens plenty of
fields
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in the society. Copying another
one
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is a natural
behviour
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behaviour
in human beings .
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, children want to buy
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a
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the
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toy
that is
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similar to
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their
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his
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their
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friend's
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friend
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toy .
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, it is a natural
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audited
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so it is easy to be reflected on
peoples
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people's
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choice
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choices
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in eating and fashion. The companies are
a ware
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aware
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of
this
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behivour
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behaviour
so they work on increasing their income by making
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adversities
to
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their commodities by using popular
people
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such
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as
blogers
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bloggers
on
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Instagram
.To explain , in modern days there are many
blogers
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bloggers
such
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as
chiness
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Chinese
bloger
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blogger
bloggers
who reflect their culture of clothes to youth. Copying
now days
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nowadays
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becomes easier by using social media as now
one
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doesn't use it .
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,
this
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behivour
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behaviour
of
individual
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individuals
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opens plenty of
fields
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for
people
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to work
on
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it
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apply
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like marketing,
Restuarants
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Restaurants
and clothes
shop
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shops
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. To illustrate, In
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there are many
people
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who
Choses
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choose
, to be bloggers
for
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to
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advirtising
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advertising
food. They go to
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restaurants
and show to youth how it is so perty
then
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youth
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the youth
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went
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to try
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this restaurants
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.
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hence
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, working on
peoples
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people's
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popularity to increase
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company
profits
is
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proved his Success. • In
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Conclusion
, I believe that
people
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's popularity can open doors to plenty of
fields
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like Marketing restaurants and it is easy to Copy popular
people
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on the things that non popular and popular use
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in their daily life as, food and clothes.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • conform
  • social norms
  • evolutionary psychology
  • survival
  • advertising
  • influencer marketing
  • celebrity endorsements
  • trends
  • followers
  • psychological comfort
  • social ostracism
  • mass production
  • high-end fashion
  • uniformity
  • cultural homogenization
  • globalization
  • media
  • spread
  • affordable
  • imitate
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