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The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the information on waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts the data
of
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on
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 garbage disposal methods in a European country
through
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over
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 the period of 4 years.
It is clear that
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 discarding
waste
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 in landfill is the most common method but it is gradually being replaced by dumping
waste
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 in the sea. In 2005,
the
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apply
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landfill
waste
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 disposal was
most
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the most
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 common method, with 2000
million
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tonnes
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 of
wate
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waste
water
disposed
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ofdisposed
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,
this
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 garbage clearing method fell by 400
million
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tonnes
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 in 2006, and by 700
million
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tonnes
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 in 2008, reaching a low of 1300
million
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 in 2008. Burning
waste
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 showed fluctuation throughout the period, starting with 900
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005, increasing to 1200
million
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tonnes
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 in 2006, and falling again to below 900
million
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 in 2008.
On the other hand
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, dumping
waste
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 in
sea
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the sea
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 showed a steady increment over the years, starting with 1200
million
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tonnes
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 in 2005, increasing by 400
million
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tonnes
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 in 2006, reaching an all-time high of approximately 1640
million
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tonnes
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 in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • trends
  • recycling
  • landfill
  • incineration
  • annual
  • percentages
  • reliance
  • shifts in preferences
  • progress
  • regression
  • future considerations
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management policies
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