You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

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Dear Ram,
Hai
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Hi
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!
how
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How
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are you? am good.
how
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How
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about your family members? I saw your father in hospital
last
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week, does he have any health
issue
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issues
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?
please
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Please
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take care of him. its been
very
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a very
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long that we had
conversation
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a conversation
the conversation
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and
meet
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met
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up.
now
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Now
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I
came
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have come
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up with
letter
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a letter
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to inform you that recently I switched to
new
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a new
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job role in a company. The reason
beyond
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for
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this
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shifting
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shift
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is just because
of
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my position and designation had been raised with
new
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a new
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proposed good salary, you
could
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can
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remember that in
previous
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the previous
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company I just served as
management
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a management
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trainee under
PMO
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the PMO
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role for
past
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the past
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4 years with less salary .
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, here I got
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the oppourtunity
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oppourtunity
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opportunity
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as
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to
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project
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a project
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manager
that
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which
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would
made
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make
be made
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happy
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me happy
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and
intrest
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interested
to show
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in showing
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my skills more here in the company. I
get
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got
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to know that you are in search of
job
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a job
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,
if
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If
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you wish could you please share
you
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your
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resume with me,
because
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apply
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I could see that we have
a openings
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an opening
openings
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right away. so that I will be
reeferring
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referring
you.
apart from
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this
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information. Anyway had a good day with you by spending time
in
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wrting
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writing
letter
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a letter
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to my best friend. I hope will meet soon. Regards Santhosh
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