You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you changed jobs describe your new job tell him/her your other news

#work #company #friend #jobs #job #news

Dear Ram,

Hai

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how

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How

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are you? am good.

how

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How

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about your family members? I saw your father in hospital

last

week, does he have any health

issue

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please

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take care of him. its been

very

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long that we had

conversation

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a conversation

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and

meet

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up.

now

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came

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up with

letter

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to inform you that recently I switched to

new

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job role in a company. The reason

beyond

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this

shifting

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is just because

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my position and designation had been raised with

new

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proposed good salary, you

could

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remember that in

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company I just served as

management

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a management

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trainee under

PMO

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role for

past

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4 years with less salary .

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, here I got

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the oppourtunity

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oppourtunity

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opportunity

to promote

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project

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manager

that

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would

made

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happy

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me happy

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and

intrest

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interested

to show

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my skills more here in the company. I

get

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to know that you are in search of

job

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a job

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you wish could you please share

you

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resume with me,

because

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I could see that we have

a openings

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right away. so that I will be

reeferring

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referring

you.

apart from

this

information. Anyway had a good day with you by spending time

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wrting

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writing

letter

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a letter

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to my best friend. I hope will meet soon. Regards Santhosh

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
40Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

204 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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In the forthcoming, all cars buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your view.

something will be fine when people do it many times, however, it brings negative consequences if they do too much

Some people prefer to spend more time improving their careers. Others think that it’s more important to spend time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.