The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain

parts of the world including the prediction of the future. Summarise the information

by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the population growth in cities in the past and
also
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shows
prediction
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predictions
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in
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for
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the future in some regions of the globe.
It is clear that
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the census in urban areas is growing and Latin America has the highest count of people over the years. The amount of people in urban regions in the whole world and Africa is increasing, starting with 30% and nearly 11% respectively in 1950,
then
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approximately 49% and 39% in 2000, and it is predicted to reach 60% and 51% by 2030.
On the other hand
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,
Population
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the Population
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in modern areas in the Caribbean is the highest starting
with
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at
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slightly above 41% in 1950. And is projected to reach 80% in 2030. As for Asia, it started with nearly above 10% and
expected
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is expected
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to hit approximately 58% in 2030.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban population
  • future predictions
  • historical data
  • urbanization trends
  • rates of growth
  • developed countries
  • developing countries
  • economic development
  • migration
  • government policies
  • upward trend
  • pace of urbanization
  • catching up
  • comparative analysis
  • regional differences
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