Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays in the present there are many
people
have
too many choices for their aim in the future for Correct pronoun usage
who have
exam
when they must go to Fix the agreement mistake
exams
working
or Replace the word
work
choice
of university and other. However
some people
there is only one choice
because they have problem
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problems
about
expenses. In the following paragraph, both views Change preposition
with
of
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on
this
topic will be discussed in detail.
From the essay, if we talk about many families or people
, who have good standing, they will many
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have many
choice
in their Change to a plural noun
choices
life
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lives
such
as when they study in the
school, they will study in good schools because they have money Correct article usage
apply
for
pay expensive term fees. Change preposition
to
Moreover
they have a special education same. Add a comma
,Moreover
Which
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This
this
will give them a lot of choice
than some Fix the agreement mistake
choices
people
. So when they have a lot of choice
will be good for them in the future.
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choices
However
, there are many people
, who have a
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apply
few
money Correct quantifier usage
little
due to
they are poor. In my opinion
I disagree with Add a comma
,opinion
this
statement because l though
everyone should get many Correct your spelling
thought
choice
the same, Change to a plural noun
choices
which
the government should Correct word choice
and
to
have good management in Change the verb form
apply
them
country Correct your spelling
the
such
as the government should be given to them in terms of work and education. However
the
most Correct article usage
apply
people
, they
are poor but there Correct pronoun usage
apply
is
some Change the verb form
are
people
,which they have aim for their dreams so many people
succeed even though they few
options.
In summary, both views there are different Add a missing verb
have few
infrastructure
in own life, Fix the agreement mistake
infrastructures
which
some families are wealthy and Correct pronoun usage
apply
other
are poor. So they have different Fix the agreement mistake
others
choice
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