In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters, and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?
In today's modern society where
science
and technology
attract a lot of attention, people
who work in the arts
field also
receive recognition from the public. This
is mainly because the arts
can bring people
different values
that science
and technology
cannot.
First and foremost, the arts
help people
see and understand what happens in life from different aspects. This
means that while
science
and technology
focus on the essence of problems, the arts
help people
deal with them in other ways that they imagine and want to. For example
, the four-leaf clover in the eyes of scientists is only a herbaceous plant and is an unusual variation of the clover due to
faulty gene synthesis. However
, in the eyes of artists, it is considered a blessing and motivation for those who own it. This
way of seeing life helps people
to gain deeper insights into the world and teaches them to think from different perspectives when encountering problems.
Moreover
, the arts
help preserve cultural values
. This
can be clearly seen that traditional cultural values
are preserved in various art forms by older generations. Thus
, future generations can inherit specific cultural traits and understand their importance and responsibility for continuing to preserve them. For instance
, Hue royal court music is one of the long-standing artistic cultures of Vietnam and is still handed down to the present day. It is also
recognized by UNESCO as a cultural heritage.
In conclusion, although
it is admitted that science
and technology
contribute greatly to people
’s lives, I believe that in the world of arts
, they can learn various values
that are absent from the world of science
and technology
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