you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. you do not fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to editor of the newspaper. in your letter. say whivh points in the article you agree with. explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writter of the article.

Dear sir I am writing to bring your attention to a lot of unsimilar things
are
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witnesed
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witnessed
in every
cities
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city
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in my country.
Although
high rise
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building
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buildings
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and
shoping
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shopping
mals
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malls
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are as same as
other
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in other
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cities, various facilities have been
centerlized
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centralized
centralised
in
diffirent
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different
part
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parts
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of
country
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the country
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. As you know TEHRAN is a mega city in my
father land
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fatherland
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,
obviously
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you can not find a building like Milad
tower
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in other cities.
More over
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Moreover
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you can not find ancient
hous
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houses
in
capital
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the capital
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of
country
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the country
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because every 5 years
appartment
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apartment
apartments
are renovated so if you want to see the old houses or huge
meusem
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museums
you should travel to SHIRAZ or ISFAHAN. There are
nit
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not
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a great number of towns which
are have
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have
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an unintrupted
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unintrupted
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uninterrupted
view
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views
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, Just 2 towns have
this
option, Tehran and Lahijan, People go to the top of the town because those
situation
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dominate the whole city. I do
recomend
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recommend
you
to
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apply
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hire a tour guide to see my
polise
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police
better and
be
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find out
different
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about different
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tourist
attraction
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attractions
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in my city.
please
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Please
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let me know if you require any
further
information. your
faithfuly
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faithfully
faithful
SAED TAVAZOIE
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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