you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. you do not fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to editor of the newspaper. in your letter. say whivh points in the article you agree with. explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writter of the article.

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Dear sir I am writing to bring your attention to a lot of unsimilar things

are

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that are

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witnesed

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witnessed

in every

cities

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city

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in my country.

Although

high rise

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building

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buildings

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and

shoping

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shopping

mals

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malls

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are as same as

other

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in other

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cities, various facilities have been

centerlized

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centralized

centralised

diffirent

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different

part

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parts

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country

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the country

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. As you know TEHRAN is a mega city in my

father land

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fatherland

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obviously

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you can not find a building like Milad

tower

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in other cities.

More over

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Moreover

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you can not find ancient

hous

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houses

capital

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the capital

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country

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the country

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because every 5 years

appartment

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apartment

apartments

are renovated so if you want to see the old houses or huge

meusem

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museums

you should travel to SHIRAZ or ISFAHAN. There are

nit

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not

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a great number of towns which

are have

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have

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an unintrupted

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unintrupted

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uninterrupted

view

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views

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, Just 2 towns have

this

option, Tehran and Lahijan, People go to the top of the town because those

situation

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dominate the whole city. I do

recomend

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recommend

you

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apply

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hire a tour guide to see my

polise

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police

better and

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apply

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find out

different

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about different

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tourist

attraction

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attractions

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in my city.

please

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let me know if you require any

further

information. your

faithfuly

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faithfully

faithful

SAED TAVAZOIE

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
35Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

184 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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