you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other. you do not fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to editor of the newspaper. in your letter. say whivh points in the article you agree with. explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writter of the article.
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Dear sir
I am writing to bring your attention to a lot of unsimilar things
are
Correct pronoun usage
that are
witnesed
in every Correct your spelling
witnessed
cities
in my country.
Change to a singular noun
city
Although
high rise
Add a hyphen
high-rise
building
and Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
shoping
Correct your spelling
shopping
mals
are as same as Correct your spelling
malls
other
cities, various facilities have been Change preposition
in other
centerlized
in Correct your spelling
centralized
centralised
diffirent
Correct your spelling
different
part
of Fix the agreement mistake
parts
country
.
As you know TEHRAN is a mega city in my Add an article
the country
father land
, Correct your spelling
fatherland
obviously
you can not find a building like Milad Add a comma
,obviously
tower
in other cities. Capitalize word
Tower
More over
you can not find ancient Correct your spelling
Moreover
hous
in Correct your spelling
houses
capital
of Add an article
the capital
country
because every 5 years Add an article
the country
appartment
are renovated so if you want to see the old houses or huge Correct your spelling
apartment
apartments
meusem
you should travel to SHIRAZ or ISFAHAN.
There are Correct your spelling
museums
nit
a great number of towns which Correct your spelling
not
are have
Change the verb form
have
Correct article usage
an unintrupted
unintrupted
Correct your spelling
uninterrupted
view
, Just 2 towns have Fix the agreement mistake
views
this
option, Tehran and Lahijan, People go to the top of the town because those situation
dominate the whole city.
I do Change the determiner
situations
recomend
you Correct your spelling
recommend
to
hire a tour guide to see my Fix the infinitive
apply
polise
better and Correct your spelling
police
be
find out Unnecessary verb
apply
different
tourist Change preposition
about different
attraction
in my city.
Fix the agreement mistake
attractions
please
let me know if you require any Capitalize word
Please
further
information.
your faithfuly
SAED TAVAZOIECorrect your spelling
faithfully
faithful
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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
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- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,