Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problem does this cause? What are some possible solutions
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are emulating with youngsters in order to find the same job. However
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centres
such
as universities, colleges, and academies. Moreover
, employers in every workplace prefer to hire young and new labours
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For instance
, there are some companies all over the world who just engage young qualified people
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problem is not indissoluble and would be answered if governments pay more attention to the old people
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that is
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