Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problem does this cause? What are some possible solutions

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days, it can be seen that aged
people
are emulating with youngsters in order to find the same job.
However
,
this
competition would cause a number of problems, there are some solutions to them. Obviously, there are some
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problems
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in
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case. Since,
younger
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generation is more educated and qualified
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of educational
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such
as universities, colleges, and academies.
Moreover
, employers in every workplace prefer to hire young and new
labours
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in order to be assured that their business is not under any threat made by elders who do not have enough information or academic resources in that field which would be a big serious obstacle to their team.
For instance
, there are some companies all over the world who just engage young qualified
people
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their goals.
However
,
this
problem is not indissoluble and would be answered if governments pay more attention to the old
people
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society. One attempt
that is
possible to do is to establish a number of institutions just for training elders in various subjects
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and make them ready to be employed by companies or
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that need workers. In
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case, the government should invest more budget in
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of
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generation. As a case in point, there are some campaigns in the US
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their duty is to find old
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train them to be skilled
then
introduce them to related workplaces. By a way of conclusion, I restate my argument
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Nevertheless
, there are some problems faced by elders looking for a job, there are
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