Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to your friend. In your email, recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn explain how your friend could learn this sport suggest that you both learn this sport together Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Alex, Hope

this

finds you well. I am glad to know that you have made up your mind about learning physical activity. In my humble opinion, I suggest you learn badminton as the

stadium

is near your residence.

Moreover

, there are special offers going on at MT

Stadium

due to

summer vacation. You can visit the

stadium

and opt for trainers

according to

your availability and budget.

In addition

, my friend from school has an Olympic certificate in badminton who can assist you with the sport and diet. If you are planning to join the

stadium

on weekends

then

I can join you to learn badminton and we can spend more time

due to

this

leisure activity. We will be physically fit and healthy together. Looking forward to your positive response. If you need any other advice, kindly let me know. Best Regards, David

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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