The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the process of turning
milk
into the
cheese products that are sold in many shops today.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, it can be inferred that the are nine steps in total in the process, with the first step being acidification, where raw milk
are
added into a bottle with bacteria. The Change the verb form
is
last
step is the finished product being transported to shops as the last
step.
Looking closer, we can surmise that the raw milk
, having been solidified by tenzymes
, Correct your spelling
enzymes
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
then
cut into small pieces. From there, the manufacturers put them through the process of heating and draining. These small pieces of curled milk
are brought to boil
, evaporating the liquids. After seasoning the products with salt, the cheese Correct article usage
a boil
are
shaped by pressing them into molds and Change the verb form
is
let be
to ferment. By the time of two months, the cheese will have been ready to be packaged and shipped to be sold in shops.Wrong verb form
letting
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