The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

The charts below show ưhat UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008
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The provided bar charts illustrate the
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of UK
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who did not go to a full-time job after their graduation and postgraduation in the year 2008.
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, there was the highest
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of
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who continued their educations after graduating.
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, among graduate and postgraduate people who did work without any payment was the lowest
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. As far as the
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of degree holders is concerned, 29665
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continued their studies, which was the highest.
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, there were 16235 individuals who did not have a job after the degree. Among those, some people who worked did not have any salary, which was 3500. And, 17735 individuals did part-time jobs. When it comes to the postgraduate
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, 2725
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continued
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studies. Unemployment and part-time workers were 1625 and 2535, respectively. Among those, 345
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did voluntary work.
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