You have been living in a rented house for the last six months. Your neighbour has a new dog that makes a lot of noise at night, preventing you from sleeping. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter - describe the problem with the dog -explain why it is important for you to get enough sleep - suggest what your neighbour could do about the situation.

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Dear Dave, Hope you doing okay! I am writing
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letter in regard to the noise that your dog makes at night. For some reason, he keeps barking for a long time
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midnight in the back garden, which hinders me
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from having
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a good
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sleep. It is important for me to get enough sleep because I have to wake up early every day to go to work. I
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have to cook my own food, as I am living in a rented house alone and I have to work on
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for long hours. So, not sleeping well would break my concentration, which
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put me in a problem at work and I would not be able to do house chores properly. I would suggest and request that to keep your dog from barking unnecessarily, please keep him at your home, so that others will not get disturbed by him. Best wishes Maninder
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