At present, science is developing quickly, but some people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of life that science cannot?

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Clean
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is fundamental to health. Recently,
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quality
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in Indonesia has been worsening, especially in major cities
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, Bogor, Tangerang, Bandung, etc.
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is one of the areas that have poor
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quality
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with Particulate Matter (PM) 2.5 concentrations reaching 17.5 times than WHO
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guidelines have made. Poor
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quality
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in
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can affect performance from anyone considering that
Jakarta
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is the economic centre of Indonesia. Household combustion devices, motor vehicles, industrial facilities, and forest fires are common sources of
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pollution. The effects of poor
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quality
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are respiratory infections, lung cancer, and systems in the body that can't work optimally.
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, governments must seek solutions to make the
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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