The graph provides information about the percentage of tourists to England who visited brighton attractions in the last decades.
The graph provides information about the percentage of
tourists
to England who visited brighton
attractions in the Change the capitalization
Brighton
last
decades.
There are two basic general attractions:downward and upward.As regards the first,the percentages for Pavilion
were higher in 1980,increasing significantly from almost 25 percent
a month to just 31 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2010.
Change the spelling
per cent
By contrast
,the percentage for the other three attractions went down than pavilion
.Correct article usage
the pavilion
there
was a rise in Pier`s Capitalize word
There
tourists
,over the first 20 years,followed by a sudden increase to 21 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
However
,the percent
for both art Replace the word
percentage
gallery
and Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
Add an article
the festival
festival
Fix the agreement mistake
festivals
also
ended the year down in 2010.After
this
,the persentage
Correct your spelling
percentage
for
Change preposition
of
Art
Correct article usage
the Art
gallery
fell steadily ending the year at about 8 Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
However
,the tourists
Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
for
Change preposition
to
Pavilion
was upward.Between 1980 and 2010,the tourists
Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
for
Festival were almost 28 Change preposition
to
percent
.It can be said that the percentages in the last
15 years was
the same.The Change the verb form
were
tourists
in Pier in the 30 years,Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
counting
by Correct word choice
and counting
percent
doubled from 10 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
to 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.Anyway,Change the spelling
per cent
that is
a good result for this
attraction.
The noticeable information for Pavilion
is that the percentage for Pavilion
was the highest result between the attracttions
in Brighton.Correct your spelling
attractions
attraction
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