The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year.

The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year.
The pie
chart
shows the average monthly
student
expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar
chart
shows sources of
student
income
in the same year. The pie
chart
displays the money spent by
students
monthly in the UK, in the year 2016,
while
the bar
chart
represents how
students
earned their
income
in the same year.
Overall
, the majority of the expenditures were allocated for rent and a substantial
income
came from the
student
loan. First of all, half of the expenditure of the
student
was allocated to rent, accounting for 385
dollars
. The other half of the
chart
was formed by five other categories. Noticeable, is food with a monthly expenditure of 124
dollars
,
then
we have bills, travel and socialising expenditures, which consist of 69
dollars
, 52
dollars
, and 64
dollars
respectively. The
students
earn their
income
through different sources. The majority of the
students
had their money because of the
student
loan (80%).
In addition
, others received help from their family, accounting for 70%, nearly the same percentage of people had a part-time job. Similar percentages are shared by
students
who used their savings, had a bank overdraft or grandt and founding, they stood at 45%, 40% and 38% respectively.
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