The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph gives us some information about the account of
shops
that opening or closure.
In 2011 and 2015 the number
of shops
that opened was more than the number
of shops
that closed. It's the only two years that opened are more than closures. It means that the economy at that time was scent and people had desires and enough money to buy what they wanted. In 2012, many shops
that opened in 2011 led to the number
that opened in 2012 decreasing and the number
of closures more than opened.
In 2014, the number
of boutique
that closed and opened almost had a balance means that the economy at the moment is not well that people open a shop quickly and Change to a plural noun
boutiques
also
close quickly. In 2015, the number
of shops
that closed sharply decreased but the number
of shops
that opened wasn't that much because the number
of shops
that closed last
year was too much causing people afraid of opening a shop. After 2018 the number
of shops
that opened is getting less than ever.Submitted by yao20010210 on
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