The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
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illustrations
the data about in 1968 and 2018 how family Replace the word
illustrates
spented
their money in weekly in one country.
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spend
spent
Overall
, people Linking Words
spended
a lot of money Correct your spelling
spent
in
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on
campared
to other Correct your spelling
compared
typs
of Correct your spelling
types
speading
was highest Correct your spelling
spending
spreading
speeding
un
1968. Correct your spelling
in
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, Linking Words
this
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partent
had Correct your spelling
parent
change
in 2018, Change the verb form
changed
the
family using their money equally Correct word choice
and the
in
food, Change preposition
for
gousing
and leisure.
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housing
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, the Linking Words
speading
type of food was Correct your spelling
spreading
speeding
most
higher than Correct quantifier usage
apply
other type
around 35% in 1968Change the wording
another type
other types
,
but decreased Remove the comma
apply
dramatic
in 2018. In Change the adjective
dramatically
addtion
, the percentage of Correct your spelling
addition
speading
in housing and clothing was similar Correct your spelling
spending
speeding
perseatage
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percentage
become
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became
secound
higher Correct your spelling
second
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than thps
thps
of Correct your spelling
that
speading
around 10%. Correct your spelling
spending
speeding
spreading
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, household goods, personal goods and transport Linking Words
was
nearly 10%.
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were
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, there was Linking Words
diferent partent
in 2018. The percentage of leisure was Correct your spelling
different parties
highest
spending compared to Change the article
the highest
other type
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another type
other types
also
more than double that of 1968. Linking Words
Furthermore
housing Linking Words
speading
in 2018 was Correct your spelling
spreading
spending
speeding
also
higher Linking Words
tham
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than
1968
around 10% Change preposition
in 1968
become
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becoming
second
highest Correct article usage
the second
speading
.Correct your spelling
spending
spreading
speeding
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