The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.
The bar
praph
demonstrates the Correct your spelling
graph
percentage
of the total world
population
in four major countries in 1950 and 2002, and estimation for 2050. Overall
, China
and india
constitute the largest Change the capitalization
India
portion
in every period. However
, while
the percentage
of the total world
population
in India
increase
over time, the percentages of every other Wrong verb form
increased
countries
including Change to a singular noun
country
China
decrease
.
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decreased
Firstly
, in 1950, China
had the largest portion
in
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of
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the world
world
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world's
population
. It took 23% of Correct article usage
the world
world
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world's
population
, while
India
took 15%. USA
and Correct article usage
The USA
Japan
have considerable
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a considerable
percentage
as well, which was 7% and 4% repectively
.
As time passed by, in 2002, Correct your spelling
respectively
India
's percentage
rised up
to 17% Verb problem
rose
while
China
's percentage
decreased to 20%. Meanwhile, USA
experienced severe loss and reached Correct article usage
the USA
to
5%, and Change preposition
apply
Japan
's portion
decreased to 3%
Lastly
, in 2050, It is estimated that India
will have the largest portion
in
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of
world
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the world
populartion
. It will reach Correct your spelling
population
to
18%, Change preposition
apply
while
China
's ratio will decrease to 15%. On the other hand
, USA's
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the USA's
percentage
will remain same
as Correct article usage
the same
2002
, Change preposition
in 2002
while
the percentage
of Japan
shrink to 1% of the total world
population
.
In summary, India
and China
have the largest population
in all periods, while
the percentage
of India
is expected to surpass that of China
in 2050. USA
have relatively similar percentages in the three periods, around 5%, Correct article usage
The USA
while
Japan
's ratio will shrink from 4% to 1% in 2050.Submitted by eerkare on
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