You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The provided flow chart illustrates the detailed process of cheese which uses milk is made of all stages from the first to end with the shops.
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It can be seen that the nine stages consist which start with acidificationLinking Words
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Firstly
, before curds are made that are solidification, the milk raw and bacteria in the bottle are enzymes by acidification. Linking Words
Next,
the curds are separated into small pieces after small pieces have been heated and drained until these are turned into liquid form. Linking Words
Then
, these liquid forms have been transferred to big containers and have been added salt. After that, satly curds are moved to the machine to be shaped. Linking Words
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, These cheese molds are put oven because of fermentation for 2 months. After 2 mounts, they are packed Linking Words
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a suitable shape Linking Words
such
as, rectangular, or triangular. Linking Words
Finally
, these packed cheeses have been transferred to the shops because they are sold to people.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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