The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
The given table indicates the percentages of students who enrolled at four different types of secondary school from 2000 to 2009. Taken as a whole, obviously, there was a downward trend seen in
specialist
,
grammar
and voluntary-controlled
schools
;
nevertheless
, the
last
type of
schools
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, community, experienced a remarkable increase, particularly peaking in the
year
2009.
To begin
with, more than half of the students totalstudents’total enrolled in Voluntary-controlled
Schools
in 2000, the figure regarding community
schools
was just 12
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, equal to that of
specialist
schools
. At the same
times
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,
grammar
schools
represented
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just under one-four of the
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After five years, the proportion of learners attending community
schools
increased by 20
percent
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and surged well to well over 50
percent
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in the
year
2009. An opposite trend could be observed in the case of voluntary-controlled
schools
as their figure dipped to 38
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in the
year
2005 and 20
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in 2009
Grammar
Schools
and
Specialist
Schools
also
saw declines in attendance but less noticeable. The percentage of learners in
grammar
schools
dropped marginally from 24
percent
in 2000 to 19
percent
in the
year
2005 and period at 10
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per cent
in 2009, meanwhile,
specialist
schools
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became
11
percent
in 2005 and
then
exactly 10
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per cent
by the end of the given period.
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