The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of people that don't manage the capacity of reading around the world in the last
year. In addition
, it gives us information about the region and the gender of this
population.
Overall
, it can be argued that females represent the biggest percentage
in each region if compared with males. Moreover
, this
tendency is more frequent in countries
like Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States and South Asia.
Focusing more on details, in these three countries
mentioned before, illiteracy is quite elevated with a percentage
that goes around 30% for men and around 50% for women. Furthermore
, more than 10% of people are illiterate in countries
like Latin America and the Caribbean. Almost the same happens in East Asia and Oceania with a percentage
of 10% for men and 20% for women. Finally
, illiteracy is almost impossible to find in Developed Countries
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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